hmm
So I know this song from the DS version. I really liked the beat you had going at the start. i would never have expected that for this song. I felt that the main melody was a bit too slow once it started and I didn't like the sound(the synth) that you used for it at first.
Around 2 and half minutes though you have a nice arpeggio style line going on while the melody is playing and it worked really well. I only wish you had better sounds/synths to work with because overall the sounds aren't that interesting.
Still, I enjoyed listening to it, and enjoyed the rhythmic beat it had. Cool job.